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Văn bản từ levi_becke - English

  • Random rambling about random rambling. You’ll get the idea.

  • I need to start writing my journals in English I suppose.
    • I’d like to reach the fluency in speaking English.
    • To achieve that goal I’ll write in English for some time and the main rule is that I don’t correct myself.
    • I’m not doing any edits no corrections, nothing.
  • I’m writing as I think in real time, because I think it’s the way I’d speak.
    • I want to know what mistakes I am making, and what are my speaking (thinking?) habits and patterns to improve on them.
  • If I wasn’t writing as I think and without corrections I wouldn’t know which parts of my skills I need to improve.
    • Also if I would correct myself I wouldn’t know if there is a better way to say something (that part I don’t know if I can explain clearly).
  • And of course there are going to be mistakes which are simply due to the fact that I’m not structuring my speech and I’m just trying to think things out of a top of my head but it really doesn’t matter from my point of view.
  • What I need to do after this exercise is to give this text to someone, it would be best if that would be a native speaker, to get a comprehensive review of it and suggestions where I can make improvements as well as what parts don’t sound natural.
    • I remember Iggy said to me, that I could use more of ”linking words” (I don’t remember the name) for example rather than using ”but” all the time try to use ”although” or ”however”.
    • What I feel I have the most problem with is just grammar.
    • That’s something I could learn just from the book although (wink wink) when I try to do that I don’t know where to start and sometimes I’m just getting bored because I feel like I know most of the stuff, which obviously is not true.
    • Despite that fact I could use knowledge of which particular pieces of grammar I lack to improve on particular topic, which won’t be so dull and boring for me (because it would be something that I know I have problem with).
    • The main problem with those texts I’m trying to write is, that I’m not exercising the way of speaking about past or future.
    • I’m just spilling facts and opinions which doesn’t lead to use complex grammar structures or anything.
  • I don’t really know.
  • Anyway, I think that would be just enough to get some feedback and serve as a sample of my speech (or writing).
  • If someone’s reading this - thank you for your help.
  • Have a good day : )

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
    • To achieve that goal I’ll write in English for some time and the main rule is that I don’t correct myself.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • To achieve that goal,
      I’ll write in English for some time and the main rule is that I don’t correct myself.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
  • câu 5
  • câu 6
    • I want to know what mistakes I am making, and what are my speaking (thinking?) habits and patterns to improve on them.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I want to know what mistakes I am making, and what are my speaking (thinking?) habits and patterns so as to improve on them.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • If I wasn’t writing as I think and without corrections I wouldn’t know which parts of my skills I need to improve.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Also if I would correct myself I wouldn’t know if there is a better way to say something (that part I don’t know if I can explain clearly).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Also if I would correct myself then I wouldn’t know if there is a better way to say something (that part I don’t know if I can explain clearly).
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • And of course there are going to be mistakes which are simply due to the fact that I’m not structuring my speech and I’m just trying to think things out of a top of my head but it really doesn’t matter from my point of view.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
  • câu 10
    • What I need to do after this exercise is to give this text to someone, it would be best if that would be a native speaker, to get a comprehensive review of it and suggestions where I can make improvements as well as what parts don’t sound natural.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 10
  • câu 11
    • I remember Iggy said to me, that I could use more of ”linking words” (I don’t remember the name) for example rather than using ”but” all the time try to use ”although” or ”however”.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I remember Iggy said to me, that I could use more of ”linking words” (I don’t remember the name) f. For example, rather than using
      ”but” all the time tryhen instead trying to use ”although” or ”however”.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
  • câu 13
    • That’s something I could learn just from the book although (wink wink) when I try to do that I don’t know where to start and sometimes I’m just getting bored because I feel like I know most of the stuff, which obviously is not true.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • That’s something I could learn just from the book although (wink wink) w. When I try to do that I don’t know where to start and s. Sometimes I’m just getting bored because I feel like I know most of the stuff, which obviously is not true.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13
  • câu 14
    • Despite that fact I could use knowledge of which particular pieces of grammar I lack to improve on particular topic, which won’t be so dull and boring for me (because it would be something that I know I have problem with).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Despite that fact I could use knowledge of which particular pieces of grammar I lack to improve on a particular topic, which won’t be so dull and boring for me (because it would be something that I know I have a problem with).
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14
  • câu 15
    • The main problem with those texts I’m trying to write is, that I’m not exercising the way of speaking about past or future.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The main problem with those texts I’m trying to write is, that I’m not exercising the way of speaking about past or future.
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments 1
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
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  • câu 18
    • Anyway, I think that would be just enough to get some feedback and serve as a sample of my speech (or writing).
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
  • câu 19
  • câu 20