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    • Essay

  • My name is Yuliya Makogon.
    • Currently I'm third year student and I study advertising.
    • This is a developing sphere in Ukraine, that's why I want to be involved into this process and to make a contribution, because I really want to make my country better and make everything in my power.
    • So I want gain experience from other countries to make my vision more complex.
    • I think that modern people should be multifaceted, therefore I like to study and develop in different spheres: music, design, philosophy, advertising and as well filmmaking.

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