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  • 10.2

    • I went to Birmingham in the afternoon with Freddy, we went to GNC the supplement shop where I buy my supplements and he bought isolate protein.
    • Then we walked in the street and went in a pub restaurant where we got lunch : chicken boneless with chips and a bottle of cider and a pint of beer very nice.
    • Afterwards I got cash money to give him back and we discussed after a coffee drink we got in Greggs.
    • We went back to Walsall and I got back home at 7 pm and having dinner.

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    • I went to Birmingham in the afternoon with Freddy, we went to GNC the supplement shop where I buy my supplements and he bought isolate protein.
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    • I went to Birmingham in the afternoon with Freddy, w. We went to GNC, the supplement shop where I buy my supplements, and he bought isolate protein there.
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    • This afternoon I went to Birimingham in the afternoon with Freddy, w. We went to GNC, the supplement shop where I buy my supplements and h. He bought isolate protein.
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    • I went to Birmingham in the afternoon with Freddy, w. We went to GNC the supplement shop where I buyought my supplements and he bought isolate protein.
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    • Then we walked in the street and went in a pub restaurant where we got lunch : chicken boneless with chips and a bottle of cider and a pint of beer very nice.
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    • Then, we walked ion the streets and went into a pub restaurant where we got lunch : chicken. We ordered boneless chicken with chips and, a bottle of cider, and a pint of beer. It was very nice.
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    • Then we walked ion the street and went into a pub restaurant where we gothad our lunch :boneless chicken boneless with chips and a bottle of cider and a pint of beer which was very nice.
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