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  • Babylon

    • Our cities become more and more similar to Babylon - the largest city of the Ancient World.
    • It was the first megalopolis, the city with about 150-200 thousands of inhabitants.
    • In the modern world this number sounds funny, especially in comparing with Asian cities, although Europe also didn’t go far by its crowded.
    • Babylon is also famous as abode of vice and associated with such modern concepts as globalism and multiculturalism, which are filling the world.
    • I’ve remember about Babylon yesterday when I was returning from the National park Curonian Spit.
    • It seems that the National park should be a stronghold of peace and quiet.
    • But even there were hustle and bustle.
    • Oh, I forgot that it is Saturday.
  • Along with Sunday they are crazy days, full of people, noise and uproar.
    • Fortunately for me people don’t like to wake up early, to sleep longer is a happiness for them.
    • So better for me, even at 7 am I was yet alone walking in the ”Dancing forest”, which is one of the ecological paths in the National park.
    • Although to the 8 am the first people began to appear and to the midday woke up decisively all.
    • When I was crossing the popular resort town it was a real bacchanalia worthy of Babylon.
    • On the repairing embankment were unimaginable flows of people, bicycles, dogs, children, right here builders, everything is mixed up in this ”crazy house” - human hubbub, construction noise, the raging Baltic Sea and strong west wind completed the picture.
    • Even after I passed this Sodom, there on the bicycle path still was unreal crowded.
    • After I finally arrived home I decisively made a conclusion and a choice between sunset and sunrise.
  • There is no more suitable time than weekdays and early morning.
  • I can’t impact on this madness, but I can avoid it choosing the right time and the right place.
    • I wish that you always could make a right conclusion, stay happy and healthy.

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    • In the modern world this number sounds funny, especially in comparing with Asian cities, although Europe also didn’t go far by its crowded.
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    • In the modern world this number sounds funny, especially iwhen comparing with Asian cities, although Europe also didn’wasn't gso far by itsmuch more crowded itself.
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    • Babylon is also famous as abode of vice and associated with such modern concepts as globalism and multiculturalism, which are filling the world.
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    • Babylon is also famous as an abode of vice and its associatedion with such modern concepts as globalism and multiculturalism, which are filling the world.
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    • I’ve remember about Babylon yesterday when I was returning from the National park Curonian Spit.
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    • I’ve remembered about Babylon yesterday when I was returning from the National park Curonian SpitCuronian Spit National Park.
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    • So better for me, even at 7 am I was yet alone walking in the ”Dancing forest”, which is one of the ecological paths in the National park.
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    • So this was better for me, even at 7 am. I was yet alone walking in the ”Dancing forest”, which is one of the ecological paths in the Nnational park.
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    • Although to the 8 am the first people began to appear and to the midday woke up decisively all.
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    • Although to theUnfortunately, by 8 am the first people have began to appear and to the midday woke upthen by midday all have decisively allwoken up.
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    • On the repairing embankment were unimaginable flows of people, bicycles, dogs, children, right here builders, everything is mixed up in this ”crazy house” - human hubbub, construction noise, the raging Baltic Sea and strong west wind completed the picture.
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    • On the repairing embankment, which was under repair, were unimaginable flows of people, bicycles, dogs, and children, r. Right hthere were builders, everything is mixed up in this ”crazymad house” - a human hubbub, construction noise, the raging Baltic Sea and a strong westerly wind completed the picture.
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    • After I finally arrived home I decisively made a conclusion and a choice between sunset and sunrise.
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    • After I had finally arrived home, I decisively made acame to the conclusion andof a choice between sunset and sunrise.
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