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- 不要帆
- 我母亲想跟帆我一起，但是我觉得太无聊，所以我在家逗留。

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- 不要帆去航海
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- 不要帆玩帆船
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- 我母亲想跟帆我一起，但是我觉得太无聊，所以我在家逗留。
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- 我母亲想~~跟帆我一起~~我跟她一起去航海，但是我觉得太无聊，所以我~~在家逗留~~留在了家里。
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- ~~我母亲想跟帆我一起~~妈妈想和我一起去玩帆船，但是我觉得~~太无聊~~没意思，所以我~~在家逗留~~决定呆在家里。
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- 我母亲~~想跟帆我一起，但是~~要我跟她一起去玩帆船，我觉得太无聊了，所以我~~在家逗留~~就留在家里了，没有跟她去。
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