Text from Yancylee - English
Travel
- Two years ago , my families went on a trip to QingYuan of GuangZhou.
- Because of the long distance drive, as soon as we arrived , we were tired and went to hotel to have a rest.
- Next day morning , we did some physical activities, including climbing moutain,walking on swinging bridges and steel nets on the water, climbing the steel nets from one side of the moutain to the other said.
- All of them impressed me a lot because they are dangerous and energy-comsuming .
- Particularly,walking on swinging bridges on the water gave me a fright,I was almost falling into the water.
- We followed the tour guide and saw peacocks, which were fenced into a big circle.
- There were alco a lot of monkeys in another big fence .
- I peeled off my banana and fed them.
- One of them was crazy about banana and ate it out very quickly.
- At our meal time, all of dishes are chicken as they called QingYuan a chicken village.
- The afternoon activity was to take a bath in springs.
- There were many different kinds of scents, such as rose flower,mint scent , lavender and so on.
- Specially, there is a very cold spring.
- It's too cold so we didn't try that one.
- I would recommand everyone go there and I believe they will have a great day there.
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