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    • If I had million dollars

  • People of different ages have a dream.
    • Someone wants to live abroad, the other people dream to be popular.
    • We want to be healthy, happy, to have many friends and to be independent.
    • But everyone dreams to have a million dollars one day and to spend these money for different things.
  • If I had a million dollars I would not waste my money.
    • It is not a real dream to have these money, but they would help my dream to come true.
    • First of all I would buy my own apartment because I want to be independent in my home.
    • And I would buy one or two apartments to take them for rent.
  • I want to have passive income.
  • I would buy a house on the seaside.
  • I like to spend my holidays at the sea.
    • Of course I would give serious sum to my mother.
  • She has been saving money all these years for me and I think it’s time to help her.
    • I would take her to the expensive jewellery and let her chose what she wants.
    • Also I would buy voucher for my mother to the health boarding house.
  • I want her to improve her health.
    • I want to show her a world but my mum is afraid of flights.
    • Also I would continue my education.
    • I already have one higher education in aviation area but I have always dreamed to be psychologist.
    • If I have money I will enter the university.
    • After university I would open my business - consulting service.
  • I want to be useful and to help people in difficult personal situations.
    • I think I will be good in psychology.
    • Also I will put some money in the bank, cause I want to be sure in tomorrow.
    • Of course I would buy new clothes, footwear, cosmetics and some little things for me.
  • I’m a true girl and want to look beautiful.
    • I will definately do the eye surgery, cause I feel like improving my sight.
  • The next step is the improving of my teeth.
    • And finally I would like to do full medicinal examination of my health.
    • I will buy fitness club membership.
    • Now I do sport at home but I think there is much better to do exercises in fitness hall.
  • I do not know how much money I would spend for all these things but I also want to donate something.
    • It’s so sad that people especially children still suffer because of different diseases.
  • I would really like to invest some money in this research.
    • Maybe these money will help one day to find new medicine.
    • If I still have something in my pocket I would travel.
  • I would like to see Spain, Kuba, Marocco, Mauritius.
    • In Russia I would like to visit The lake Baikal.
  • I think it is so great and clean.
  • These place are so different and interesting to me.
    • I think I could buy there some presents for my family and friends to make them happy.
    • I love my friends very much and I feel like their wishes coming true.
    • So if I have million dollars I will spend some of it for my friends the great dreams.
    • I know that if my friends have a lot of money they will do the same for me!
    • Well it is easy to say how I would spend these money.
    • For me it’s important if they really can make somebody happy.
    • Money is only instrument, but not a dream.
    • I am very ambitious person and I am sure one day all my dreams will come true.

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