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    • road safety and increasing the minimum legal age for driving

    • Some individuals believe that increasing the minimum legal age for driving is a good method to increase traffic safety.
    • While this way seems to be adequate and justified, I only partially agree with such a statement, because there may not be a one exact opinion due to the distinctive examples and diversity of the people’s driving behavior.
    • While getting older, people became more responsible, which revealed a higher attention for safety, particularly.
    • Young people tend to be impulsive and make reckless quick decisions that sometimes cause accidental accidents on the roads, for instance.
    • In my personal experience, I have observed a variety of the traffic accidents caused by younger incautious drivers, where most of these had received driver’s license recently and still had not been sufficiently skillful and moral prepared for driving a car.
    • Meanwhile, there are various examples when traffic accidents have been caused by younger people, however, adults to the same extent can create dangers during driving.
    • Sometimes, being tired, distracted, or, in more serious cases, drunk, adults could cause devastating traffic accidents, although they might have been drivers for a very long period of time.
    • Social media shows a huge amount of incidents caused by not-adequate drunk drivers, that occured not depending on the person’s experience or age.
    • To conclude, I cannot state whether I totally agree with the statement that the best way to increase road safety is to raise the minimum legal age for driving.
  • On the one hand, young drivers tend to be more reckless and sometimes lack the driving experience, meanwhile, on the other hand, older drivers could cause dramatic road accidents due to being distracted, tired, or even drunk.

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    • While this way seems to be adequate and justified, I only partially agree with such a statement, because there may not be a one exact opinion due to the distinctive examples and diversity of the people’s driving behavior.
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    • While this way seems to be adequate and justified, I only partially agree with such a statement, because there may not be a onsingle exact opinion due to the distinctive examples and diversity of the people's driving behavior.
    • While this way seems to be adequatapproach seems reasonable and justifiabled, I only partially agree with such a statement, because there may not be a one exact opinion due to the distinctive examples andit owing to the diversity of the people’s driving behavior.
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    • While getting older, people became more responsible, which revealed a higher attention for safety, particularly.
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    • While getting older, people becaome more responsible, which revealed a higher attention for safety, particularly.
    • While getting older, peopleAs people age they became more responsible, which revealed a high and exhibit greater attention forto safety, in particularly.
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    • Young people tend to be impulsive and make reckless quick decisions that sometimes cause accidental accidents on the roads, for instance.
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    • Young people tend to be impulsive and make reckless quick decisions that are reckless and which sometimes cause accidental accidents on the roads, for instance.
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    • In my personal experience, I have observed a variety of the traffic accidents caused by younger incautious drivers, where most of these had received driver’s license recently and still had not been sufficiently skillful and moral prepared for driving a car.
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    • In my personal experience, I have observed a variety of the traffic accidents caused by younger incautious drivers, where most of thesem had received their driver’'s license recently and still had not been sufficiently skillful and morally prepared for driving a car.
    • In my have personal experience, I have observly witnessed a variety of the traffic accidents caused by younger incautious younger drivers, where most of these hadmany of whom had only recently received a driver’s license recently and still hadand were not been sufficiently skillful anded or morally prepared forto drivinge a car.
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    • Meanwhile, there are various examples when traffic accidents have been caused by younger people, however, adults to the same extent can create dangers during driving.
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    • Meanwhile, while there are various examples whenre traffic accidents have been caused by younger people, however, adults to the same extent can create dangers during driving.
    • MeanwWhile, there are variousmany examples whenof traffic accidents have beenbeing caused by younger people, howevolder, adults to the same extent can create dangers duringare also the cause of accidents and dangerous situations while driving.
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    • Sometimes, being tired, distracted, or, in more serious cases, drunk, adults could cause devastating traffic accidents, although they might have been drivers for a very long period of time.
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    • Sometimes, adults being tired, distracted, or, in more serious cases, being drunk, adults couldcan cause devastating traffic accidents, although they might despite possibly haveing been drivers for a very long period of timelong-time drivers .
    • Sometimes, beingEven though they may have been driving for many years, older drivers who are tired, distracted, or, in -- more serious cases, drunk, adults couldly -- inebriated are the cause of devastating traffic accidents, although they might have been drivers for a very long period of time.
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    • Social media shows a huge amount of incidents caused by not-adequate drunk drivers, that occured not depending on the person’s experience or age.
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    • Social media shows a huge amount of incidents caused by not-adequatirresponsible drunk drivers, that occured not depending on the person’s irrelevant of experience or age.
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    • To conclude, I cannot state whether I totally agree with the statement that the best way to increase road safety is to raise the minimum legal age for driving.
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    • To conclude, I cannot state whether I totadon't fully agree with the statement that the best way to increase road safety is to raise the minimum legal age for driving.
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    • On the one hand, young drivers tend to be more reckless and sometimes lack the driving experience, meanwhile, on the other hand, older drivers could cause dramatic road accidents due to being distracted, tired, or even drunk.
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