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  • A journey with friends

    • Last Sunday was a special day, I went with my friends on a journey to one of the highest mountains in the country, So , we meet at six o’clock in the morning , and we had cooperated to bring what we need to go through our adventure , At first , Our plan was to climb the mountain until we reach to the peak , But when we had started climbing we faced a lot of hardships , After awhile , Some of my friends decided to stop because they got exhausted and they wouldn’t able to continue especially after the temperature had risen sharply, I got a little upset because I thought it was the end of the fun , But we switch our plan to have lunch in the forest beside the mountain , and we continued that day playing football and chasing , I think it was a fantastic day when l spent my time enjoying myself with my friends

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    • Last Sunday was a special day, I went with my friends on a journey to one of the highest mountains in the country, So , we meet at six o’clock in the morning , and we had cooperated to bring what we need to go through our adventure , At first , Our plan was to climb the mountain until we reach to the peak , But when we had started climbing we faced a lot of hardships , After awhile , Some of my friends decided to stop because they got exhausted and they wouldn’t able to continue especially after the temperature had risen sharply, I got a little upset because I thought it was the end of the fun , But we switch our plan to have lunch in the forest beside the mountain , and we continued that day playing football and chasing , I think it was a fantastic day when l spent my time enjoying myself with my friends
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    • Last Sunday was a special day,. I went with my friends on a journey to one of the highest mountains in the country, So , w. We meet at six o'clock in the morning , and we had cooperated to bringbrought what we needed to go through our adventure ,. At first , Oour plan was to climb the mountain until we reach toed the peak , Bbut when we had started climbing we faced a lot of hardships ,. After awhile , Ssome of my friends decided to stop because they got exhausted and they wouldn’eren't able to continue especially after the temperature had risen sharply,. I got a little upset because I thought it was the end of the fun , But. Instead we switched our plan to have lunch in the forest beside the mountain , and w. We continued that day playing football and chasing ,each other. I think it was a fantastic day when le had spent my time enjoying myself with my friends.
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