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    • Fried orange

    • Yesterday I saw a funny video: one man told us, how to make a fried orange - at first he seriosly told, how to take an orange, how to put it on the wineglass with a little candle inside, and how to cut fruits and berries into small pieces.
    • It was a parody on restaurants, when you pay a lot, and get a big plate with a little pieces of food on it.
    • After making this very pathetic dish (which consisted of an orange, a little piece of lemon, a little thin piece of strawberry and two grapes), that man had thrown it into the trash and had a big aspic with a meat and a salad of herring.
    • It made me laugh and it made me hungry.
    • It was really funny - it could not be descripted.

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    • Yesterday I saw a funny video: one man told us, how to make a fried orange - at first he seriosly told, how to take an orange, how to put it on the wineglass with a little candle inside, and how to cut fruits and berries into small pieces.
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    • Yesterday I saw a funny video: onea man told us,demonstrated how to make a fried orange - a. At first he explained seriously told, how to take an orange, how to put it oin thea wineglass with a little candle inside, and how to cut fruits and berries into small pieces.
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    • After making this very pathetic dish (which consisted of an orange, a little piece of lemon, a little thin piece of strawberry and two grapes), that man had thrown it into the trash and had a big aspic with a meat and a salad of herring.
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    • After making this very pathetic dish (which consisted of an orange, a little piece of lemon, a little thin piece of strawberry and two grapes), thate man had thrownthrew it into the trash and had a big aspic with a meat and a salad of herring salad.
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