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Text from noemie_van - English

    • Could you please help me correct my cover letter ?

    • Dear Hiring Manager, I am currently looking for an internship in Canada for a period of 3 months starting from October 1st, 2021 to put my knowledge and skills into practice.
    • As a master’s degree student in translation and international relations, I have developed not only great linguistic knowledge but also a solid general knowledge which, I am convinced, fit your requirements.
    • Indeed, I am working daily on texts covering a wide range of subjects and I am using different languages including French, English and Chinese.
    • Moreover, I personally believe that being able to speak and work with different languages is crucial in building strong client relationships; not only it demonstrates your interest in their culture but also your investment in their language.
    • Therefore, I guarantee that my strong communication as well as my time-management skills will help me excel as an intern at your company.
    • First, my great interest in languages gave me the opportunity to go to Canada as an exchange student in 2016.
    • As I just graduated from high school, it was important to me to broaden my knowledge of the world and learn a different language and culture by immersion.
    • In addition, during my final of my bachelor’s degree and as part of my Erasmus program, I had another opportunity to study in Canada, this time at The University of xxx.
    • There, I took English classes to improve my language skills, but I also attended an international trade course as well as a trans-cultural communication course which helped me understand even more foreign trade techniques.
    • Thank you for taking the time to read my application.
    • I am available for interview at any time and look forward to hearing from you soon.
    • Sincerely, XXX

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    • Dear Hiring Manager, I am currently looking for an internship in Canada for a period of 3 months starting from October 1st, 2021 to put my knowledge and skills into practice.
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    • Dear Hiring Manager,¶

      I am currently looking for an internship in Canada for
      a period of 3 months starting from October 1st, 2021, to put my knowledge and skills into practice.
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    • As a master’s degree student in translation and international relations, I have developed not only great linguistic knowledge but also a solid general knowledge which, I am convinced, fit your requirements.
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    • As a master’s degree student in tTranslation and iInternational rRelations, I have developed not only great linguistic knowledge but arefined linguistic skillso and solid general knowledge, which, I am convinced, fits your requirements.
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    • Indeed, I am working daily on texts covering a wide range of subjects and I am using different languages including French, English and Chinese.
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    • Indeed, I am workingAlso, I increase my literal expertise via daily on texts coveringfrom a wide range of subjects and I am using different languages, including French, English, and Chinese.
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    • Moreover, I personally believe that being able to speak and work with different languages is crucial in building strong client relationships; not only it demonstrates your interest in their culture but also your investment in their language.
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    • Moreover, I personally believe that being able to speak and work with different languages is crucial in building strong client relationships; not only does it demonstrates your interest in their culture but also your investment in their language.
    • Moreover, I personally believe that being able to speak and work witham of the opinion that working proficiency in different languages is crucial in building strong client relationships; not only it demonstrates your interest in their culture but also your and expanding a firm's client base as it demonstrates value for a client's culture and deliberate investment in their language.
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    • Therefore, I guarantee that my strong communication as well as my time-management skills will help me excel as an intern at your company.
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    • Therefore, I guarantee that my strongexcellent communication as well as mynd time-management skills will help me excel as an intern at yourXXX company.
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    • First, my great interest in languages gave me the opportunity to go to Canada as an exchange student in 2016.
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    • First, my great interest in languages gave mAt this point, I must mention that my thrill for languages helped me secure the opportunity to go to Canada as an exchange student in 2016.
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    • As I just graduated from high school, it was important to me to broaden my knowledge of the world and learn a different language and culture by immersion.
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    • As I just graduated from high school, it was important to met that time, I was a recent high school graduate who deemed it necessary to broaden my knowledge of the world and learimmerse myself in a different language and culture by immersion.
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    • In addition, during my final of my bachelor’s degree and as part of my Erasmus program, I had another opportunity to study in Canada, this time at The University of xxx.
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    • In addition, during my finalbefore the end of my bachelor's degree program and as part of my Erasmus program, I had another opportunity to study in Canada, this time at The University of xxx.
    • In addition, during my final ofwhen completing my bachelor’s degree and as part of my Erasmus program, I hasecured another opportunityffer to study in Canada, this time at T at the University of xxx.
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    • There, I took English classes to improve my language skills, but I also attended an international trade course as well as a trans-cultural communication course which helped me understand even more foreign trade techniques.
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    • There, I took English classes to improve my language skills, but. Not only that, I also attended an international trade course as well as a trans-cultural communication course which helped me understand even more foreign trade techniques.
    • There, I took English classes to improve my language skills, butmastery of the language. Nonetheless, I also attended an international trade course as well asnd a trans-cultural communication course, which helpdeepened mey understand even moreing of foreign trade techniques.
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