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    • Wed 28 Mar 18

    • I am in positive thoughts everyday and don't let bad feelings and sadness overwhelm me, I trust in myself and I know I will accomplish my goals.
    • I focus on my plans and start to be very kind with other people.
    • It's thanks to Simon that told me about a method consisting of visualising yourself achieving your dreams and being positive and convinced you gonna realised them to bring it to happen.

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    • I am in positive thoughts everyday and don't let bad feelings and sadness overwhelm me, I trust in myself and I know I will accomplish my goals.
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    • I am in positive in my thoughts everyday and don't let bad feelings and sadness overwhelm me,. I trust in myself, and I know I will accomplish my goals.
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    • I a'm in positive thoughts everyday and I don't let bad feelings and sadness overwhelm me, I trust in myself and I know I wi'll accomplish my goals.
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    • I am in positive thoughts everyday and don't let bad feelings and sadness overwhelm me, I trust in myself and I know I will accomplish my goals.
      When you are already in good thoughts we all know that you don't let bad things ruin it that's why you are in good thoughts, you don't need to tell us that you don't let bad feelings in but rather you should tell us that you won't allow bad feelings and sadness in. So, it should be like this.¶
      I am in positive thoughts everyday and I won't let bad feelings and sadness overwhelm me, I trust in myself and I know I will accomplish my goals.
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    • It's thanks to Simon that told me about a method consisting of visualising yourself achieving your dreams and being positive and convinced you gonna realised them to bring it to happen.
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    • It's thanks to Simon that told me about a method consisting of visualising yourself achieving your dreams and being positive and convinced you gonna realised them to bring it to happenthe dreams into real life.
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    • It'sAll thanks to Simon thatwho told me about a method consisting of visualiszing yourself, achieving your dreams and being positive and convinced you gonna realiszed them to bring it to happen.
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