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  • My experiences working as a pizza-deliverant

    • Hey, I'm 19 years old and til a few months ago, I used to study in the German form of senior highschool and freshman year, the so-called "Abitur".
    • Therefore, I hadn't the time to work in a full-time job, so I worked (and still work) as a pizza-deliverant, just to improve my monthly budget a bit as i didn't want to get all my money from my parents.
    • Of course, this job takes a lot of time you would like to spend on other things like meeting friends, relaxing and having fun doing something else, but there are some experiences because of which I'm happy i work there as they are really funny.
  • For example, once, a customer took his food, turned around to put it on the table and dropped it.
    • He started blaming me and as I said that i didn't even move, he started blaming his dog!
  • A few seconds later, he was absolutely calm again and apoligized to his dog and to me.
  • Or another customer ALWAYS opens the door in his underwear, and before I ring his bell, I'm always like "Oh god, I don't want to see his barely clothed legs again." But it's a funny story to tell.
  • Sometimes, my boss is really weird.
    • He always gives his employees the fault for things he obviously did himself.
  • Like once, he dropped a bottle of oil which smashed and started shouting at the pizzabaker, who was standing 5 meters away.
    • Weill, these a just some of a lot of storys happening at my work and sometimes it's funny to think about them.

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    • Hey, I'm 19 years old and til a few months ago, I used to study in the German form of senior highschool and freshman year, the so-called "Abitur".
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    • Hey, I'm 19 years old and til a few months ago, I used to studyied in the German form of senior highschool and freshman year, the so-called "Abitur".
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    • Therefore, I hadn't the time to work in a full-time job, so I worked (and still work) as a pizza-deliverant, just to improve my monthly budget a bit as i didn't want to get all my money from my parents.
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    • Therefore, I hadn't the time to work in a full-time job, so I worked (and still work) as a pizza- deliveranty-boy, just to improve my monthly budget a bit as i didn't want to get all my money from my parents.
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    • Of course, this job takes a lot of time you would like to spend on other things like meeting friends, relaxing and having fun doing something else, but there are some experiences because of which I'm happy i work there as they are really funny.
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    • Of course, this job takes a lot of time you would like to spend on other things like meeting friends, relaxing and having fun doing something else, but there are some experiences because offor which I'm happy iI work there as they are really funny.
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    • Or another customer ALWAYS opens the door in his underwear, and before I ring his bell, I'm always like "Oh god, I don't want to see his barely clothed legs again." But it's a funny story to tell.
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