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  • Letter of motivation

    • Dear Sir I am currently taking in classes to prepare students for the entrance examinations to the top-ranking higher education establishments and I am contacting you in order to submit an application for a seasonal job.
    • I am available for whatever is to be done for the period between 1st July and 1st August.
    • I already have experience as organizer of summer camp and pick Boy ball to Roland Garros what demonstrate my good relationship, my sense of responsability and duty I am motivated All the more to improve in English and to have a new work experience I am available to provide any further information you request regarding my application I look forward to meeting you soon. Best regards.

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    • Dear Sir I am currently taking in classes to prepare students for the entrance examinations to the top-ranking higher education establishments and I am contacting you in order to submit an application for a seasonal job.
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    • Dear Sir, ¶¶I am currently taking in classes to prepare students for the entrance examinations to the top-ranking higher education establishments and I am contacting you in order to submit an application for a seasonal job.
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    • I already have experience as organizer of summer camp and pick Boy ball to Roland Garros what demonstrate my good relationship, my sense of responsability and duty I am motivated All the more to improve in English and to have a new work experience I am available to provide any further information you request regarding my application I look forward to meeting you soon. Best regards.
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    • I already have experience as an organizer of activities at a summer camp and pick Boytch youth ball to Roland Garros, whatich demonstrate my good relationship,s my sense of responsability and duty¶¶I am strongly motivated All the more to improve my skills in English and to have a new work experience .¶¶I am available to provide any further information you request regarding my application¶¶I look forward to meeting you soon. ¶ ¶Best regards. ,¶(your full name here)
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