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  • I.Immigration (first part)

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    • It's for an important oral exam.) In United States and especially from 1892 to 1924 , 20 million immigrants came through Ellis Island station .
    • Since 1600 ,there are 60 million of immigrants , they came from 10000 cities, villages and ghettos .
    • Between all this different types of immigrants we can quote a christian family who fled religious persecution from Turkey .
    • Usually immigrants came to United States to reach a better way of life .
    • What does the new Etatsunians expect from their adopted country ?
    • Firstly, We shall see why the immigrants choose America as their destination and the difficulties they endure and secondly, their integration.
    • Finally we will think out the fact that the american dream is still an exemple .

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    • It's for an important oral exam.) In United States and especially from 1892 to 1924 , 20 million immigrants came through Ellis Island station .
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    • It's for an important oral exam.)¶¶In the United States and, especially from 1892 to 1924 , 20 million immigrants came through Ellis Island station .
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    • (It's for an important oral exam.). ¶¶In the United States and especially from, in the period between 1892 toand 1924 , 20 million immigrants came through the Ellis Island station .
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    • Between all this different types of immigrants we can quote a christian family who fled religious persecution from Turkey .
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    • BetweenAmong all this different types of immigrants, we can quotsee for example a cChristian family who fled religious persecution fromin Turkey .
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    • BetweenAmong all thisese different types of immigrants we can quotefind, for example, a cChristian family who fled religious persecution fromin Turkey .
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    • Firstly, We shall see why the immigrants choose America as their destination and the difficulties they endure and secondly, their integration.
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    • Firstly, Wwe shall see why the immigrants choose America as their destination and examine the difficulties they endure and sd. Secondly, we will consider their integration.
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