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    • Goal

    • One of my goals is travelling around the world to know new cultures, I'd love to see in real life what I've see in books, TV and internet: museums, natural beauties, wonderful places...
    • I try to be open-minded, empathy is a gift, seeing through someone else's eyes we could find out that we're not that different, that in the fund we value the same special things.
    • I admire people who is polyglot, I'm studying English and I hope to master English one day.

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    • One of my goals is travelling around the world to know new cultures, I'd love to see in real life what I've see in books, TV and internet: museums, natural beauties, wonderful places...
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    • One of my goals is to travelling around the world to know new cultures,. I'd love to see in real life what I've seen in books, TV's and internet: museums, natural beauties, wonderful places...
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  • Sentence 2
    • I try to be open-minded, empathy is a gift, seeing through someone else's eyes we could find out that we're not that different, that in the fund we value the same special things.
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    • I try to be an open-minded, e person. Empathy is a gift, seeing through someone else's eyes we could find out that we're not that different, t. That in the fundreality we value the same special things.
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