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  • Hey! This is my first post!

    • What's up guys?
    • This is my first post here so I'm gonna introduce myself, I'm Quique, I'm in love with USA specially with California, I don't know what can I say in this post haha Oh yeah my favourite band is blink-182, I went to their show in Madrid and wow that was amazing.
    • Just wanna say that I'm here for improving my english skills because I feel very ashamed when I talk with someone face to face.
    • And yeah I think that's all for my first post, See ya! ^^

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    • This is my first post here so I'm gonna introduce myself, I'm Quique, I'm in love with USA specially with California, I don't know what can I say in this post haha Oh yeah my favourite band is blink-182, I went to their show in Madrid and wow that was amazing.
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    • This is my first post here so I'm gonnaing to introduce myself,¶. I'm Quique, and I'm in love with USA especially with California, I don't know what can I say in this post haha¶Oh yeah. Also, my favourite band is bBlink-182,. I went to their show in Madrid and wow that was an amazing experience.
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    • This is my first post here, so I'm gonnaing to introduce myself,.¶I'm Quique,. I'm in love with USA the US, especially with California, . (I don't know what can Ielse to say in this post, haha.) Oh yeah, my favourite band is bBlink-182,. I went to their show in Madrid, and wow, that was amazing.
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    • Just wanna say that I'm here for improving my english skills because I feel very ashamed when I talk with someone face to face.
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    • Just wanna say that I'm here forI'm seeking to improvinge my eEnglish language skills because I feel very ashamed when I talk with someone face to face.
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    • JI just wannat to say that I'm here forto improvinge my eEnglish skills because I feel very ashamed when I talspeak with someone face to face.
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