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Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to rema
- Obviously actual generations live longer than past generations.
- This is because we work less hours and the machines help us to realize hard works.
- Therefore we can find two points of view, on the one hand the point of view of the government and the other hand the point of view of workers.
- If I thought as a politician, I would search the option more economic.
- And it would be that workers work as longer than he could because if they retire early the government would pay pension.
- In contrast, if I were a worker, I would think that I must retire as soon as were possible.
- Because usually workers works harder and a long time.
- In my opinion is more important worker’s health than economic things because if workers retire earlier, younger workers could start working and provide new ideas.
- This is the reason why I think the best age to retire is 55.
- And a good idea could be that since 50 to 55 workers teach to young workers.
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