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    • To begin with, one of the biggest problems that older women facing is the stereotype of housewife work being a natural obligation.
    • Nowadays, the civilization asserts that the ability of women to maintain the organization and the cleaning is a gift of their nature.
    • For example, “cooking, cleaning, caring, being teacher and nurse …” is the responsibility of them for love to their family.
    • To solve this problem, the society, principally children and husbands within families should change these ideas.
    • For instance, the education in the houses and schools, also the policies could consider the domestics task a job done by women as any other job.
    • As a result of such action, the older women will have the same opportunities for do other different jobs to be housewife.

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  • Sentence 1
    • To begin with, one of the biggest problems that older women facing is the stereotype of housewife work being a natural obligation.
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    • To begin with, one of the biggest problems that older women are facing is the stereotype of housewife work being a natural obligation.
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  • Sentence 2
    • Nowadays, the civilization asserts that the ability of women to maintain the organization and the cleaning is a gift of their nature.
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    • Nowadays, the civilizationsociety asserts that the ability of women to maintain the organization in their homes and the cleaning them is a gift of their nature.
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  • Sentence 3
    • For example, “cooking, cleaning, caring, being teacher and nurse …” is the responsibility of them for love to their family.
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    • For example, “cooking, cleaning, caring, being a teacher andor nurse …” is their responsibility of them forto show love to their familyies.
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    • For instance, the education in the houses and schools, also the policies could consider the domestics task a job done by women as any other job.
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    • For instance, the education in the houses and schools, also the, family life, and governmental policiesy could consider the domestics task a jobs done by women asequal to any other job.
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  • Sentence 6
    • As a result of such action, the older women will have the same opportunities for do other different jobs to be housewife.
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    • As a result of such action, the older women who are housewives will have the same opportunities for do other different jobs to be housewifeas people with other jobs do.
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