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  • In today's developing business world, more and more firms establishing, but it isn't easy to survive in this area for a long time.
  • I chose this program to have a good educational background to meet my expectations.
    • My courses will be related them for example American Immigration and it contributes to my career goals.
    • As a student, I can easily get adapted in new surroundings and it is really important for an international education system, because there are differences between other countries.
  • Such as time, languages, people and cultures.

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    • In today's developing business world, more and more firms establishing, but it isn't easy to survive in this area for a long time.
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  • Sentence 3
    • My courses will be related them for example American Immigration and it contributes to my career goals.
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    • My courses will be related them for examplo subjects like American Immigration and it will surely contributes to my career goals.
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  • Sentence 4
    • As a student, I can easily get adapted in new surroundings and it is really important for an international education system, because there are differences between other countries.
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    • As a student, I can easily get adapted in new surroundings and it is really important for an international education system, because there are lot of differences between(barriers) faced when moving to other countries.
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