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Text from julien42 - English

    • Beginner

    • Hi !
    • I'm new in this web site and i want learn English because today it's very important to know many langage.
    • My english is not very good anymore but i want really improve it.
    • I'm french and i live in Paris.
    • I would like meet some people to talk.
    • Sorry for mistake. Thanks. Julien

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English