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- First note in my log
- hi everybody! i need help in English language (write, read and speak).
- I be glad new friends and communicate))).
- And i can help in study Russian language.
- With love in Russia)))

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- First note in my log
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- First ~~note~~entry in my blog.
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- hi everybody! i need help in English language (write, read and speak).
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- hHi everybody! iI need help inwith my English ~~language~~ (write, read and speak).
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- hHi everybody! iI need help inwhit my English language (writeten, read and sp~~eak~~oken).
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- hi everybody! i need your help inwith English ~~language (write~~in writting, reading and speak)ing.
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- I be glad new friends and communicate))).
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- I will be glad to make new friends and to communicate~~)))~~ with people.
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- I'd be glad to make some new friends and to communicate~~)))~~ with them.
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- And i can help in study Russian language.
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- ~~And i can~~I could help inyou studying Russian ~~language~~.
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- AOn the other hand, i can help inyou study Russian ~~language~~.
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- With love in Russia)))
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- With love infrom Russia~~)))~~.
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First note in my log

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