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I'm :))
Hi.
My Name is Ata.
I'm 16 years old.
- My hobbies is play computer and read books.
- I love so much read books.
- I'm living İstanbul in Turkey.
I love Turkey.

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- I'm :))
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- Hi.
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- My Name is Ata.
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- I'm 16 years old.
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- My hobbies is play computer and read books.
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- My hobbies isare playing on the computer and reading books.
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- I love so much read books.
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- I love ~~so much~~to read books so much.
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- I'm living İstanbul in Turkey.
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- I'm live ing İstanbul in, Turkey.
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- I love Turkey.
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