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    • Succes

    • I want to be suces i don't know what it takes to be succes but I just know I'm willing to fight to make my dreams come realitie, I won't care about what people thinks about me.
    • I want to learn many languages as possible, I want to be a good atlete, I want to be an exelent doctor, I want to be millionaire.
    • Maybe you're reading this and you think well that's kind of hard, haha well it can be hard but not impossible if I breath that idea.
    • I've been trying my whole life and I'll die trying and if a die before making it I will die satisfy because I know that I made 200% to made it.
    • So you there yes you listen to me try the very best you can and never give in never, If God is with me who will be against me.

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    • I want to be suces i don't know what it takes to be succes but I just know I'm willing to fight to make my dreams come realitie, I won't care about what people thinks about me.
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    • I want to be succes is. I don't know what it takes to be succes but I just know I'm willinghow but I just want to fight so as to make my dreams become realitie, I won't care about what people thinks about me.
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  • Sentence 2
    • I want to learn many languages as possible, I want to be a good atlete, I want to be an exelent doctor, I want to be millionaire.
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    • I want to learn as many languages as possible, I want to be a good athlete, I want to be an excelent doctor, I want to bea millionaire.
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  • Sentence 3
    • Maybe you're reading this and you think well that's kind of hard, haha well it can be hard but not impossible if I breath that idea.
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    • Maybe you're reading this and you think well that's kind of hard, haha well it can be hard but not impossible if I breathtry that idea.
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  • Sentence 4
    • I've been trying my whole life and I'll die trying and if a die before making it I will die satisfy because I know that I made 200% to made it.
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    • I've been trying my whole life and I'll die trying it and if a die before makfinishing it I will die satisfyied because I will know that I made 200% to madehave been trying it.
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  • Sentence 5
    • So you there yes you listen to me try the very best you can and never give in never, If God is with me who will be against me.
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    • So you there yes you listen to me and try the very best you can and never give inup, never,. If God is with me who will be against me.?
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