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Hello.
My name is Mary, I'm 18 years old and I live in France.
- I'm looking for penfriends around my age to exchange about cultures.
- I'm looking for especially Japanese, Chinese, Greek, English and Spanish friends.
- Morevoer I can give french lessons, if it is possible once or twice per week, if you are interested message me!
- By the way I'd like to learn Greek and Japanese and I'm currently learning English and Spanish at school, therefore It would be great if I could learn with you!
- I'm here also to find good friends and have fun, in other words I'm looking for a long frienship.
So, I hope we could get on well!
Don't hesitate to message me!

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- My name is Mary, I'm 18 years old and I live in France.
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- I'm looking for penfriends around my age to exchange about cultures.
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- I'm looking for pen~~friend~~pals around my age to exchange about cultures.
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- I'm looking for especially Japanese, Chinese, Greek, English and Spanish friends.
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- I'm looking ~~for~~ especially for Japanese, Chinese, Greek, English and Spanish friends.
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- Morevoer I can give french lessons, if it is possible once or twice per week, if you are interested message me!
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- Morevover, I can give french lessons, if it is possible once or twice per week, if you are interested message me!
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- By the way I'd like to learn Greek and Japanese and I'm currently learning English and Spanish at school, therefore It would be great if I could learn with you!
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- By the way, I'd like to learn Greek and Japanese, and I'm currently learning English and Spanish at school, therefore Iit would be great if I could learn with you!
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- I'm here also to find good friends and have fun, in other words I'm looking for a long frienship.
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- I'm here also to find good friends and have fun~~, i~~. In other words, I'm looking for a long friendship.
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- So, I hope we could get on well!
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- Don't hesitate to message me!
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