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Text from Valver2 - English

  • cupid & pstche1

  • 1-The Three Kingdoms beautiful girls,psyche, whose name was the youngest of the sisters was more beautiful, And like a true Goddess appeared alongside humans, , So that the fame of her beauty in the world was complex and had traveled all men to be staring at him with love and awe and respect.
  • They said they could not Aldo will be on par with the human And other people to take her beauty and Venus were forgotten; Temples and shrines of Venus Psndsh being dirty and towns were destroyed, And all honor belongs to a girl who was also the day of death.

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  • Sentence 1
    • 1-The Three Kingdoms beautiful girls,psyche, whose name was the youngest of the sisters was more beautiful, And like a true Goddess appeared alongside humans, , So that the fame of her beauty in the world was complex and had traveled all men to be staring at him with love and awe and respect.
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  • Sentence 2
    • They said they could not Aldo will be on par with the human And other people to take her beauty and Venus were forgotten; Temples and shrines of Venus Psndsh being dirty and towns were destroyed, And all honor belongs to a girl who was also the day of death.
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