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  • hello

  • hi guys. im willing to learn english you could add my line or whatsapp at +62 812 19 53 54 52.
  • i also willing to teach you indonesian language. just add my line and we could comunicate each other. thank you :) im gonna share what happen today, 22-02-2014 (my country time hehe) so i start my day at 10 o'clock. i have an appointment at my university where i studied at 11 o'clock. i ride my motorcycle at 10.30am and arrive at 10.55 am. usually it takes 15 minutes to reach my university but Jakarta the city where i lived has a very bad traffic jam so it takes time double than usual.
  • as i arrived at my university, i directly head to the room where the meeting point is. but the customer service suprising me by saying that the appointment should be start at 10.00 am. i couldnt argue much because theres no authentic prove that the meeting is at 11.00 am. so i said could i reschedule the appointment please? and she said yes you could come here after lunch and she will meet you. i agree and now i have 2 hours spare times. because i have to find a gift for my friend's birthday present so i spent my 2 hours free time to walk at mall and i bought 1 shirt for him. so this is my story. pls leave a comment :)

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    • i also willing to teach you indonesian language. just add my line and we could comunicate each other. thank you :) im gonna share what happen today, 22-02-2014 (my country time hehe) so i start my day at 10 o'clock. i have an appointment at my university where i studied at 11 o'clock. i ride my motorcycle at 10.30am and arrive at 10.55 am. usually it takes 15 minutes to reach my university but Jakarta the city where i lived has a very bad traffic jam so it takes time double than usual.
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    • as i arrived at my university, i directly head to the room where the meeting point is. but the customer service suprising me by saying that the appointment should be start at 10.00 am. i couldnt argue much because theres no authentic prove that the meeting is at 11.00 am. so i said could i reschedule the appointment please? and she said yes you could come here after lunch and she will meet you. i agree and now i have 2 hours spare times. because i have to find a gift for my friend's birthday present so i spent my 2 hours free time to walk at mall and i bought 1 shirt for him. so this is my story. pls leave a comment :)
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