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    • Dear Mr. Powell First of all, let me congratulate to your new Position as a Manager.
    • In the course of the time we have always a very good Partnership and because of that, I need once again your advice.
    • As you know the regional athletics Championship is starting from 8. th to11 th.
    • June, for the following reason it is really important to provide your Foyer.
    • We should have enough Space to present our new products and if its possible, could you lease eventually also the conservatory because we awaits a VIP from the Sport-Scene.
    • Unfortunately our VIP is eccentric most of the time.Because of that I would like to ask. i beg your pardon for cricumstances.
    • If you have any questions or othe Options, please inform me at your earliest convenience, We are very much interested in further Cooperation your sincerely Dan Walthers

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    • In the course of the time we have always a very good Partnership and because of that, I need once again your advice.
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    • In the course ofAlong the time, we have always have a very good Ppartnership and because of that, I need once again your advice.
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    • In the course of the time we have always a very good Partnership and because of that, I need once again your adviWe have had a number of occasions to work harmoniously together in the past and now here I am once again, in need of your assistance.
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    • We should have enough Space to present our new products and if its possible, could you lease eventually also the conservatory because we awaits a VIP from the Sport-Scene.
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    • We should have enough Sspace to present our new products and eventually, if it's possible, you could youalso lease eventually also the¶conservatory because we awaitsre expecting a VIP from the Sport-Scene.
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    • We should have enough Space to present our new products and if its possible, could you lease eventually alsoEventually, we may also need to lease the¶c Conservatory because we awaitsexpect the presence of a VIP from the Ssport-Ss scene.
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    • Unfortunately our VIP is eccentric most of the time.Because of that I would like to ask. i beg your pardon for cricumstances.
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    • Unfortunately our VIP is eccentric most of the time.Because of that I would like to ask. i beg your pardon for cricumstances., we are not yet definitely sure of our VIP's attendance and for that reason, our leasing of the Conservatory is only tentative as of now. (please see my comment)
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    • If you have any questions or othe Options, please inform me at your earliest convenience, We are very much interested in further Cooperation your sincerely Dan Walthers
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    • If you have any questions or othe Or options, please inform me at your earliest conveniencs soon as possible, Wwe are very muchextremely interested in further Ccooperation¶¶your sincerely¶¶Dan Walthers
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    • If you have any questions or othe Opsuggestions, please inform me at your earliest convenience,let me know. We are very much interested in further Cooperationto work in cooperation with you again.¶¶yYours sincerely,¶¶Dan Walthers
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