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  • Articles from voa

    • Hello, I try to make my english better, and I found the new way of learning: I take an article from voa.com (today it was about voting in Egypt) read it, learn new words and then try to retell it using my knowledge.
    • Your opinion and corrections are needed)))Here it is...Egyptians began two days of voting.
    • Specialists say that the draft of the new constitution was made in fear, intimidation and under pressure.Majority of the nathion agrees to adopt new charter, but as country's history shows the biggest changes were made by minority.
    • Today minority tries to obstruct voting by staging protests and opening fire on passers-by, that way they attempt not to let people reach the polling centers. 

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    • Hello, I try to make my english better, and I found the new way of learning: I take an article from voa.com (today it was about voting in Egypt) read it, learn new words and then try to retell it using my knowledge.
      Vote now!
    • Hello, I am trying to makimprove my english better, and I found thea new way of learning: I take an article from voa.com (today it was about voting in Egypt), read it, learn new words and then try to retell it using my knowledge.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 1
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    • Specialists say that the draft of the new constitution was made in fear, intimidation and under pressure.Majority of the nathion agrees to adopt new charter, but as country's history shows the biggest changes were made by minority.
      Vote now!
    • Specialists say that the draft of the new constitution was made in fear, intimidation and under pressure.M The majority of the nathion has agreesd to adopt the new charter, but as the country's history shows, the biggest changes were made by the minority.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 3
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    • Today minority tries to obstruct voting by staging protests and opening fire on passers-by, that way they attempt not to let people reach the polling centers. 
      Vote now!
    • Today the minority triesd to obstruct voting by staging protests and opening fire on passers-by, that way they attempted to not to let people reach the polling centeres. 
    • Today the minority tries to obstruct voting by staging protests and opening fire on passers-by, that way they attempt not to let people to reach the polling centers. 
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 4