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  • Summer Rain

  • Summer rain is beautiful, isn’t it?
    • It is warm, freshness and smells so pleasant.
    • Besides, it is watering my garden.
    • I like rain, especially this summer one.
    • It’s quiet, falls straight and it is so nice to seat in my open gazebo under defense of a roof and feel myself safety and comfort.
    • Although I have nothing against walking in the summer rain.
    • Birds aren’t afraid of rain.
    • They still do their usual deals and look so cute, being a bit wet, but walking around like a plantation owner across deserted fields.
    • So why then people are so afraid of being wet?
    • I know I know they have no time to dry their clothes or change it for another one… Especially I like such mornings when at the sunrise the sky and clouds are painted by the rays of the rising sun.
    • Cumulus clouds are walking around at the sky, foreshadowing the rain.
    • But for now, they just play with the sun, trying to hide it, while the sun doesn’t want to obey.
    • I’m swimming in the sea admiring by this colorful game, doing my exercises looking at the rainbow illuminated by the sun, which is also reports that it’s already raining in its side.
    • The first drops fall on me, but I’m still doing my exercises – I haven’t finished it yet.
    • The rain is a nice fellow, dropping a little it stops for a while as if under a pressure of my stubbornness.
  • It even gives me some time to read under the deep blue sky.
    • Then drops started to fall again and I don’t resist this time.
    • I close my book and slowly walking back.
    • And I’m not alone, some people are also not afraid of raining– fishermen on the pier are still catching fish, a lady walking cheerfully around only in her swimsuit as if she is saying to the rain that there is nothing on her to become wet, a runner is doing his morning jogging and a person with a dog both also aren’t paying attention to these warm summer drops. It’s good.
    • My wet fellow gives me some time to that I started a bit regret that I gave in this time, but then it is started with double force… How delightful such mornings are, you did all you wanted, even the rain was waited while you finish.
    • At the same time someone just waking up and seeing just a grey sky and drops of the rain.
    • The same is in life – someone sees all in grey paints, but it’s just his own fault.
    • I wish that you always be able to see a good side in the life and could enjoy even such things as rain.
  • All in our life is for the best.

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    • It’s quiet, falls straight and it is so nice to seat in my open gazebo under defense of a roof and feel myself safety and comfort.
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    • It’s quiet, fallsing straight and it is so nice to seat in my open gazebo under the defense of a roof and feeling myself safety and in comfort.,
    • It’s quiet, falls straight and it is so nice to seait in my open gazebo under defense of a roof and feel myselfits roof feeling safety and comfortable.
      95% GOOD (21 votes)
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    • They still do their usual deals and look so cute, being a bit wet, but walking around like a plantation owner across deserted fields.
      투표하세요!
    • They still dogo about their usual dealbusiness and look so cute, being a bit wet, but walking around like a plantation owner across deserted fields.
      10% GOOD (10 votes)
    • They still dogo about their usual dealroutines/business and look so cute, being even when they're a bit wet, but walkstrutting acroundss deserted fields like a plantation owner across deserted fields / landowners.
      100% GOOD (7 votes)
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    • I know I know they have no time to dry their clothes or change it for another one… Especially I like such mornings when at the sunrise the sky and clouds are painted by the rays of the rising sun.
      투표하세요!
    • I know I know, they have no time to dry their clothes or change ithem for another ones…¶
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      , I like such mornings when at the sunrise the sky and clouds are painted by the rays ofemanating from the rising sun.
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    • But for now, they just play with the sun, trying to hide it, while the sun doesn’t want to obey.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • But for now, they are just playing with the sun, trying to hide it, whilecover its light - yet the sun doesn’t want to obeysurrender.
    • But for now, they just play with the sun, trying to hide it, while the sun doesn’t want to obey.
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    • I’m swimming in the sea admiring by this colorful game, doing my exercises looking at the rainbow illuminated by the sun, which is also reports that it’s already raining in its side.
      투표하세요!
    • I’m swimming in the sea admiring by this colorful game, doing my exercises looking at the rainbow illuminated by the sun, which is also reportsing that it’s already been raining in its side.
    • I’m swimming in the sea, admiring by this colorful game,display. I'm doing my exercises looking atwatching the rainbow, illuminated by the sun, which is also reportsignals that it’s already raining ion its side.
      100% GOOD (9 votes)
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    • The rain is a nice fellow, dropping a little it stops for a while as if under a pressure of my stubbornness.
      투표하세요!
    • The rain is such a nice fellow, dropping a little i. It stops for a while as if under athe pressure of my stubbornness.
    • The rain is a nice fellow, dropping a little it stops for a while as if under a pressure of/friendly fellow, falling briefly before pausing, as if yielding to my stubbornness.
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    • And I’m not alone, some people are also not afraid of raining– fishermen on the pier are still catching fish, a lady walking cheerfully around only in her swimsuit as if she is saying to the rain that there is nothing on her to become wet, a runner is doing his morning jogging and a person with a dog both also aren’t paying attention to these warm summer drops. It’s good.
      투표하세요!
    • And I’m not alone, s. Some people are also not afraid of it raining – fishermen on the pier are still catching fish, a lady walking cheerfully around only in her swimsuit as if she is saying to the rain that there is nothing on her to become wet, a runner is doing his morning jogging and a person with a dog, both also aren’not paying attention to these warm summer drops. It’s good.
      11% GOOD (9 votes)
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    • My wet fellow gives me some time to that I started a bit regret that I gave in this time, but then it is started with double force… How delightful such mornings are, you did all you wanted, even the rain was waited while you finish.
      투표하세요!
    • My wet fellowcompanion gives me some time tofor that. I started a bito regret a bit that I gave in this time, but then it is startedthe rain came down again with double its force… How delightful such mornings are, y. You did all you wanted, even while the rain was waited whileing for you to finish.
      11% GOOD (9 votes)
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