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- Farsi kheyli khosam miyad, vali ye mushkil daaram: Hichvaght motma'en nistam chejuri baayad "agar" estefaade konam... khob, sai mikonam: 1.
- Age ye ruz iraan beram, hichvaght in keshwaraa faraahmush nemikonam. 2.
- Age emruz vaght daashte baasham, be shomaa zang mizanam. 3.
- Age aasun bud, baraaye maghz tamrin nabud (???). 4.
- Age be man zang zadi, be khaaneyet miaamadam (???). 5.
- Age ino baraat kharidam, hich pul dige nadaashtam (???) Chejuri doroost mishe?
- Tashakore ziyad baraaye eslaah kardane shomaa!

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- Farsi kheyli khosam miyad, vali ye mushkil daaram: Hichvaght motma'en nistam chejuri baayad "agar" estefaade konam... khob, sai mikonam: 1.
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- az Farsi kheyli khosam miyad, vali ye muoshkil daaram: Hichvaght motma'en nistam chejuri ~~baayad~~az "agar" estefaade konam... khob, sai mikonam:¶1.
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- Az Farsi kheyli khosam miyad, vali ye muoshkili daaram: Hichvaght motma'en nistam chejuri baayad az (kalameye) "agar" estefaade konam... khob, sai mikonam:¶1.
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- ~~Farsi kheyli khosam miyad, vali ye mushkil daaram: Hichvaght motma'en nistam chejuri baayad "agar" estefaade konam... khob, sai mikonam:¶~~من از فارسی خیلی خوشم میاد، ولی یک مشکل دارم: هیچوقت مطمئن نیستم چطوری باید از کلمه ی "اگر" استفاده کنم...خب، سعی میکنم: 1.
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- ~~Farsi kheyli khosam miyad, vali ye mushkil daaram: Hichvaght motma'en nistam chejuri baayad "agar" estefaade konam... khob, sai mikonam:¶1.~~از زبان فارسی خیلی خوشم میاد, ولی یه مشکلی دارم:هیچ وقت مطمین نیستم چجوری باید از (اگر) استفاده کنم.سعی میکنم بهتر بشم
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- Age ye ruz iraan beram, hichvaght in keshwaraa faraahmush nemikonam. 2.
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- 1. Age ye ruz beram iraan ~~beram~~, hichvaght in keshwaraao faraahmush nemikonam~~. 2.~~
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- Age ye ruz ~~iraan beram~~beram iraan, hichvaght in keshwar ro (raa) faraahmush nemikonam. 2.
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- ~~Age ye ruz iraan beram, hichvaght in keshwaraa faraahmush nemikonam. 2.~~اگه یه روز ایران برم, هیچ وقت این کشور رو فراموش نمیکنم
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- ~~Age ye ruz iraan beram, hichvaght in keshwaraa faraahmush nemikonam. 2.~~اگه یه روز به ایران برم، هیچ وقت این کشورو فراموش نمیکنم
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- Age ye ruz iraan beram, hichvaght in keshwaraa faraahmush nemikonam. 2.
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- Age emruz vaght daashte baasham, be shomaa zang mizanam. 3.
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- ~~Age emruz vaght daashte baasham, be shomaa zang mizanam. 3~~اگه امروز وقت داشتم, به شما زنگ میزنم.
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- ~~Age emruz vaght daashte baasham, be shomaa zang mizanam. 3.~~اگه امروز وقت داشته باشم به شما زنگ میزنم
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- Age aasun bud, baraaye maghz tamrin nabud (???). 4.
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- ~~Age aasun bud, baraaye maghz tamrin nabud (???). 4~~اگه آسون بود, برای ذهن تمرین نیست.
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- Age aasun bud, baraaye maghz tamrin n~~abud (???)~~ist?. 4.
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- Ag~~e a~~ar asun bud, baraaye maghz tamrin nabud ~~(???). 4.~~.
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- Age be man zang zadi, be khaaneyet miaamadam (???). 5.
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- Age be man zang mi zadi, be khaaneye,at miaamadam (???)~~. 5.~~¶
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- ~~Age be man zang zadi, be khaaneyet miaamadam (???). 5~~اگه به من زنگ زدی به خانه ات میام .
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- Age be man zang mizadi, be khaaneyet miaamadam (???). 5.
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- Age ino baraat kharidam, hich pul dige nadaashtam (???) Chejuri doroost mishe?
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- Age ino baraat kharidam,chon dige hichi pul ~~dige~~ nadaashtam (???)¶¶Chejuri doroost mishe?
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- Bebakhshid (Age) ino baraat kharidam, dige hich pul ~~dige~~i nadaashtam (???)¶¶Chejuri doroost mishe?
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- ~~Age ino baraat kharidam, hich pul dige nadaashtam (???)¶¶Chejuri doroost mishe?~~اگه اینو برات خریدم, به خاطر این بود که هیچ پول دیگه ای نداشتم¶
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- Age ino baraat mikharidam, dige hich pul ~~dige~~i nadaashtam (???)¶
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- Tashakore ziyad baraaye eslaah kardane shomaa!
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- Tba tashakor~~e ziyad baraaye~~ besiar baraye virayesh shoma (eslaah kardan~~e shomaa!~~ arabist)
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- ~~Tashakore ziyad baraaye eslaah kardane shomaa!~~تشکر بسیار زیاد برای ویرایش شما
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- ~~Tashakore ziyad baraaye eslaah kardane shomaa!~~تشکر فراوان برای اصلاح کردن متن توسط شما
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- Tashakore ~~ziyad~~faravan baraaye eslaah kardane shomaa!¶
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- Ba Tashakore ziyad (faravan)baraaye eslaah kardane ~~shomaa!~~jomle haye man
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