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    • (ielts prep) News about problems and emergencies

    • In the recent years, because the democratization of internet access, we all have more contact with the news around the world.
  • It can generate a lot of consequences.
    • Some people can become paranoic about the news, and they are always waiting for a disaster – and this kind of reactions should be discouraged.
    • I believe a few kinds of news should not be noticed.
    • The first type of news I think should never be noticed is about suicide cases.
    • The main reason for this is simple: when a suicide is noticed, other depressed people could fell encouraged to make the same with their own life.
    • For other types of news, they should be noticed.
    • Natural disasters, political crisis, accidents, public health issues… The entire population should be informed about them.
    • Also, a free journalism is essential to democracy.
    • The journalism must be able to publish what they believe is important.
    • The only thing we need to care is about fake news – and, to do that, we must develop ways to give people the abilities to make a rapid fact-checking by the internet.
    • The fake news wave is the biggest problem for today’s journalism and internet.
    • There are a lot of small websites created within the objective to propagate fake news.
    • And it is extremely dangerous for the society.
    • I think the news are not the primary problem for the society.
    • The lie about the news, yes.
    • And to combat this, we need a strong mechanism that can be accessed by everyone, for fact-checking.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English