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- Mam, there is a girl at our kindergarten which I like so much.
- As sleep-time (quiet time, how to express it correct?
- :D ) came I wanted to kiss her...but she was lying too far, so...
- I just spit towards her.

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- Mam, there is a girl at our kindergarten which I like so much.
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- Maom, there is a girl atin our kindergarten wh~~ich~~om I like so much.
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- As sleep-time (quiet time, how to express it correct?
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- :D ) came I wanted to kiss her...but she was lying too far, so...
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- I just spit towards her.
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- I just spit ~~towards~~( spat) at (on,in) her.
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