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  • Architectural diversity

    • The Trump administration want to pass a text requiring the use of a classical style for new federal buildings or renovations.
  • Some projects could benefit from a motivated exception.
    • This act could be a danger for architecture diversity.
    • If the classical style is sometimes seen as a symbol of pride or oppression, depending on the people, modernism is a symbol of liberty, thanks to its various origins.
    • For instance, the SNMAAHC in Washington, is in a modern museum, contrasting with the classical buildings around.
    • Its style has many influences as south or west Africa.
    • Obviously, there are protestations.
    • By this text, Trump try to play supporters of the classical architecture (often the elite) and those of the architectural diversity.
    • The defenders of the proposition see in the classicism, an architecture as the witness of the greatness of the country.
    • However, a single architectural element cannot be a guaranty of success of the administration hosted by the building.
    • Moreover, , it is maybe not the most important decision to take about architecture in the USA.
    • Indeed, there are many problems about housing and infrastructure.
    • And that is more likely a indicator of the stability of a country.
    • The other, including some defenders of the classical style, are against the political proposition and prefer to defend an architectural diversity.
    • We can also see in this text, a memory of extremist regimes, as it has have existed before.
  • This debate can also show the diversity of a country itself as architectural style is matter of taste.
    • For example, the Washington building was called beautiful by the Trump administration and “the greatest monstrosity” by Truman.
    • The context of a project has a lot of sense and we can like a building or not whatever its architectural style.

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