Korrigjime

NDIHMO NË KORIGJIM TANI!korrigjuar

Tekst nga Nargesgh - English

    • Dear sir or madam,

    • I hereby wish to state my interest in place in your Doctoral School of Education.
    • I hold a bachelor’s degree in Physical Education and Sport Science from University of Tehran and master’s degree in Physical Education and Sport Science from Shahid Rajaee Teacher Training University.
  • I have been working as a teacher in pedagogy in primary and secondary schools since 2010.
    • I am very interested in teaching, especially to the young generation and children.
    • Teaching art brought me invaluable experience broadening my insight regarding my field of study which is an interdisciplinary major.
    • Of course, the subject of my thesis and articles has been related to students and young generation because it has always been a priority for me to pay attention to educating the young generation and their problems.
    • My field of study and work are related, and I have worked in education for about 10 years, so I found it necessary to pursue a doctoral in order to progress in my future career and to be updated in today’s world.

JU LUTEM NDIHMONI PËR TË KORIGJUAR ÇDO FJALI! - English

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  • Fjalia 1
    • I hereby wish to state my interest in place in your Doctoral School of Education.
      Votoni tani!


    • I hereby wish to state my interest in       a place in your Doctoral School of Education.
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    • I       hereby wish to state myam interested in applying to your Doctoral School of Education.¶

      BETTER:¶

      I am       interesting in place in your Doctoral Schoolapplying to the doctoral program in your department of Education.
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      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 1SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 1
  • Fjalia 2
    • I hold a bachelor’s degree in Physical Education and Sport Science from University of Tehran and master’s degree in Physical Education and Sport Science from Shahid Rajaee Teacher Training University.
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    • I hold a bachelor’s degree in Physical Education and Sports Science from University of Tehran and master’s degree in Physical Education and Sports Science from Shahid Rajaee Teacher Training University.
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      Votoni tani!
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  • Fjalia 3
  • Fjalia 4
  • Fjalia 5
    • Teaching art brought me invaluable experience broadening my insight regarding my field of study which is an interdisciplinary major.
      Votoni tani!
    • Teaching art has brought me invaluable experience and broadeninged my insights regarding my field of study, which is an interdisciplinary major.
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    • Teaching art brought mewas an invaluable experience that broadeninged my insightperspective regarding my own field of study which is an interdisciplinary major.
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      Votoni tani!
    • SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 5SHTO një KORRIGJIM TË RI! - Fjalia 5
  • Fjalia 6
    • Of course, the subject of my thesis and articles has been related to students and young generation because it has always been a priority for me to pay attention to educating the young generation and their problems.
      Votoni tani!
    • Of course, the subject of my thesis and articles hasve been related to students and the younger generation because it has always been a priority for me to pay attention to educating the young generation and theirpeople and their associated problems.
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    • Of course, the subject of my thesis and articles has been related to students and young generationpertains to elementary-level students because it has always been a priority for me to pay attention to educating the young generation and their problems.youths and helping them solve their problems.¶

      NOTE: You are correct: "subject" is singular, so the phrase should be "subject of my thesis and articles HAS been related to...."
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    • Of course, the subjects of my thesis and articles hasve been related to students and the younger generations because it has always been a priority for me to pay attention to educating the young generation and theirpeople and helping them with their associated problems.
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  • Fjalia 7
    • My field of study and work are related, and I have worked in education for about 10 years, so I found it necessary to pursue a doctoral in order to progress in my future career and to be updated in today’s world.
      Votoni tani!
    • My field of study and work are related, and. In addition, I have worked in education for about 10 years, so Ipproximately 10 years. Consequently, I have found it necessary to pursue a doctoralte in order to progress in my future career and to be updated inabout today’s world. ¶
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    • My field of studyinterest and work are related, and: I have worked in education for about 10 years, so I foun and have decided it is necessary to pursue a doctoral degree in order to progress in my future career and to be updated in today’s world. advance my career.¶

      NOTE: DO not put "worked about 10 years", etc. in a letter; in a letter like you cite a definite number, whether it is 9 or 10 or whatever. Be decisive!
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