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Văn bản từ Nashz - English

  • I hope you have an awesome day! 2

  • Hi, how are you?
    • I hope you have an awesome day, I want make your day to get even better!
  • You might be asking yourself!
  • Who is this girl with the funny accent who came to talk to me now?
  • Well, my name is Ana, I’m from Brazil, I’m a Digital Entrepreneur.
  • And yeah, I work one hundred percent home-office currently.
    • But, it was not always so, after many difficulties to attract customers to finally make money on the internet ...
    • One day, it was as if a watermelon had fallen on my head, that the impact of it made me discover something mysterious about hypnosis in the messages, and with that, I managed to attract many customers who put money in my pocket!
    • It seems curious but it was just like an ant connecting to your delicious piece of sugar, with super attraction, that my clients started to be attracted to me ...
  • ”Clients + me” = ”ant + sugar”. You see?
    • Do you want to know more about my curious story? and what did I create in Brazil, that I decided to bring to the world now to connect with you?
  • It’s simple, just send me ”Ok” just now and then double-click the link below to join my whatsapp group, that I will tell you something very curious and powerful that made me attract customers, so that you can also attract your customers and make money from them, the same way I can today!
  • But be quick, because unfortunately this is something so special and so unusual, that I’m going to take it off the air soon!

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    • But, it was not always so, after many difficulties to attract customers to finally make money on the internet ...
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But, it was not always. so, after many difficulties to attract customers to finally make money on the internet ...
      Samaneh4Samaneh4 profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • But, it was not always so, a. After many difficulties to attracting customers to, I'm finally makeing money on the internet ...
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • One day, it was as if a watermelon had fallen on my head, that the impact of it made me discover something mysterious about hypnosis in the messages, and with that, I managed to attract many customers who put money in my pocket!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • One day, it was as if a watermelon had fallen on my head, that t. The impact of it made me discover something mysterious about hypnosis in the messages, and, with that, I managed to attract many customers who put money in my pocket!
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • It seems curious but it was just like an ant connecting to your delicious piece of sugar, with super attraction, that my clients started to be attracted to me ...
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • It seems curious but it was just like an ant connecting to yourfinding its way to a delicious piece of sugar, with super attraction, that my clients started to be attracted to me ...
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • Do you want to know more about my curious story? and what did I create in Brazil, that I decided to bring to the world now to connect with you?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Do you want to know more about my curious story? aAnd what did I created in Brazil, that I decided to bring to the world now to connect with you?
      AussieInBgAussieInBg profile picture Comments
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
  • câu 12
    • It’s simple, just send me ”Ok” just now and then double-click the link below to join my whatsapp group, that I will tell you something very curious and powerful that made me attract customers, so that you can also attract your customers and make money from them, the same way I can today!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
  • câu 13
    • But be quick, because unfortunately this is something so special and so unusual, that I’m going to take it off the air soon!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 13