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  • My three-hour boxing career

  • I visited my grandparents during a summer holiday.
  • We live in different cities.
    • I have a friend, and he is a neighbor with my grandparents.
    • He was going to box course when I was been in there.
  • He asked me to come with him to the boxing course.
  • I said, ” Why not?”, and I went with him.
    • His coach is an ex-boxer, and he similar to a tough man.
    • He said to my friend, ” I don’t want to see a temporary person in my course”.
    • My friend said, ”He moved our city nearly, and he is a tough guy.”.
    • After the coach taught to true stepping in boxing.
    • Then he said, ”Practice in there.” I started to practice stepping for a long time, but I didn’t say anything about my tiredness.
    • Because I wanted to seem like a tough guy.
    • Its practice was very hard, it contained to running.
    • I made this exercise for nearly 3 hours.
  • I was exhausted.
    • After I did that the coach approached me.
  • And he said, ”Your condition is very good for boxing.
  • I want to see you soon.”.
    • We came to the home.
    • After this day my friend didn’t go there any, me too.
  • So I am writing this text.
  • I am happy about that very much.
  • I believe I chose the right thing.
  • I chose brainpower.

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