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  • Traveling

  • I went to Malaysia about 3 years ago.
  • I stayed in Kuala Lumpur for one week.
  • The weather was very hot and humid.
  • Nevertheless, I enjoyed it because my skin gets better in humid weather.
  • My hotel was booked with breakfast, but the hotel breakfast was not suitable for the taste of the Iranians.
    • I think that was suitable for chinese people.
    • I usually eat cheese with walnuts, butter with honey or jam and tea or coffee for breakfast, but there were fatty and cooked food.
    • Also the food looked weird and awkward.
  • Of course my hotel was clean and comfortable with good tempered and kind staff.
    • I saw many sightseeing there such as Petronas Towers ( the workers were repairing so i couldn’t cross the bridge between the two towers), Bird park ( that was full of colorful birds in a green environment), Sunway Lagoon park ( it was a water park with a lot of fun), Central Market ( l bought little because prices were high), Jamek Mosque (even though i had hijab, I had to wear a cape), Batu Caves ( there was full of monkey and bats), Genting Highlands ( we rode the cable car to reached Chin Swee Caves Temple, It was full of statues and this tample is known as heaven and hell), putrajaya ( it is a modern city near the Kuala Lumpur and most of the famous bridges in the world such as lover bridge in France or even khajo bridge in Isfahan have been built there of course symbolically and smaller.
  • It was such a pleasant experience.
  • I had a whale of a time there during my traveling.
  • Thanks so much for correcting my text.

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    • I usually eat cheese with walnuts, butter with honey or jam and tea or coffee for breakfast, but there were fatty and cooked food.
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    • I usually eat cheese with walnuts, butter with honey or jam and tea or coffee for breakfast, but there were only fatty and cooked foods.
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    • I saw many sightseeing there such as Petronas Towers ( the workers were repairing so i couldn’t cross the bridge between the two towers), Bird park ( that was full of colorful birds in a green environment), Sunway Lagoon park ( it was a water park with a lot of fun), Central Market ( l bought little because prices were high), Jamek Mosque (even though i had hijab, I had to wear a cape), Batu Caves ( there was full of monkey and bats), Genting Highlands ( we rode the cable car to reached Chin Swee Caves Temple, It was full of statues and this tample is known as heaven and hell), putrajaya ( it is a modern city near the Kuala Lumpur and most of the famous bridges in the world such as lover bridge in France or even khajo bridge in Isfahan have been built there of course symbolically and smaller.
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    • I saw many sightseeingtourist attractions there such as Petronas Towers ( the workers were repairing it so i couldn’t cross the bridge between the two towers), Bird pPark ( that was full of colorful birds in a green environment), Sunway Lagoon pPark ( it was a water park with a lot of fun), Central Market ( l bought little because prices were too high), Jamek Mosque (even though i had hijab, I had to wear a cape), Batu Caves ( therse was full of monkey and bats), Genting Highlands ( we rode the cable car to reached Chin Swee Caves Temple, It was full of statues and this taemple is known as h"Heaven and hHell"), pPutrajaya ( it is a modern city near the Kuala Lumpur and most of the famous bridges in the world such as lover bridge in France or even kKhajo bBridge in Isfahan have been built there, of course symbolicallyonly as models and smaller.
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