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    • n the modern world, It’s possible to find any information on the website : from a recipe to cook a cake to the news from the american president’s elections on real time and all that information could overwhelm anyone.
    • Now the age of the people that have access to internet is lower than in the past, so it’s easy to wonder that the new generation considers internet a part of their life and the way of learning new concept is influenced by this fact.
    • In addition, in the past, all knowledge is contained in the books and wasn’t impossible to consult them every time and everywhere, consequentially the human brain was stimulated to memorize more than now.
    • Now, we have the possibility to find all the information on the internet and so there isn’t the neccesity of memorizing and this,I think, could affect the capacity of the human brain to memorize. but related to this there ‘s a problem : not all the information are true and it’s essential to make camparison between two or more source.
    • In the end, the accesses on the internet is a important conquer, otherwise the society should be a aware of the excessive danger of using it.

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    • n the modern world, It’s possible to find any information on the website : from a recipe to cook a cake to the news from the american president’s elections on real time and all that information could overwhelm anyone.
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    • In the modern world, It’s possible to find any information on thea website : from a recipe to cook a cake to the news from the aAmerican president’sian elections oin real time and a. All that information could easily overwhelm anyone.
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    • Now the age of the people that have access to internet is lower than in the past, so it’s easy to wonder that the new generation considers internet a part of their life and the way of learning new concept is influenced by this fact.
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    • Now, the age of the people thatwho have access to iInternet is lower than in the past, so. So, it’s easy to wonder thatif the newer generation considers iInternet a part of their life and if the way of learning new concepts is influenced by this fact.
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    • In addition, in the past, all knowledge is contained in the books and wasn’t impossible to consult them every time and everywhere, consequentially the human brain was stimulated to memorize more than now.
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    • In addition, in the past, all knowledge ishad been contained in the books and wasn’t imit simply was not possible to consult them every time and everywhere, c. Consequentially the human brain washad been stimulated to memorize more than now.
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    • Now, we have the possibility to find all the information on the internet and so there isn’t the neccesity of memorizing and this,I think, could affect the capacity of the human brain to memorize. but related to this there ‘s a problem : not all the information are true and it’s essential to make camparison between two or more source.
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    • Now, we have the possibility tof find all theing any information we wish on the iInternet and, so, there isn’t no longer the neccessity of memorizing and t. This, I think, could affect the capacity of the human brain to memorize. bBut related to this there ‘exists a problem : not all the information are trueis correct and it’ is essential to make camparison betweencompare two or more sources.
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    • In the end, the accesses on the internet is a important conquer, otherwise the society should be a aware of the excessive danger of using it.
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    • In the end, the accesses on to the iInternet is a important conquer, otherwise theachievement for humanity. Nevertheless, society should be a aware of the excessiveInternet's potential danger ofs when using it.
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