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    • what do you think about fast food industry?

    • I think that fast foo industry is an aspect of globalization beacuse in every country it’s possible to find the same restaurant and food, they’re als very attractive for the low price and the delicious tasty.
    • In Italy we don’t have so many fast food as in the other country : for examle we don’t have franchising do pizza beacuse a great number of ”pizzerie” can be found with a very competitor price.
    • Actually we have fast food for haburger like MacDonald or Burger King, but in my opion thay’re a danger for the human healty beacuse if you abouse of this junk food on regular basis, it’s possible to have different problem like high pressure.

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    • I think that fast foo industry is an aspect of globalization beacuse in every country it’s possible to find the same restaurant and food, they’re als very attractive for the low price and the delicious tasty.
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    • I think that the fast food industry is an aspect of globalization beacause in every country it’s possible to find the same restaurant and food, t. They’re also very attractive for their low prices and the delicious tasty food.
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    • I think that the fast food industry is an aspect of globalization beacuse in every country it’s possible to find the same restaurant and food, they’re als very attractive for the low price and the delicious tastyand fast food in general reflects that aspect of globalization which is determined to make available certain restaurant and grocery chains, most of which offer notoriously cheap and often non-nutritious products at low prices which makes them attractive to a buying public whose financial resources are steadily eroding.
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    • In Italy we don’t have so many fast food as in the other country : for examle we don’t have franchising do pizza beacuse a great number of ”pizzerie” can be found with a very competitor price.
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    • In Italy we don’t have so many fast food as in the other country : fies. For example we don’t have pizza franchising do pizzaes beacause a great number of ”pizzerieas” can be found with a very competitorive prices.
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    • In Italy we don’t have so many fast food as in the other country :There are comparatively fewer "fast food" services in Italy than in other countries in the EU and "the West"; for example we don’t have franchising do pizza, pizza is not a "franchised" commodity in Italy beacause a great number of ”pizzerie” can be found with a veryof the many local ”pizzerias” that can be found and which offer products at competitorive price.s.
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    • Actually we have fast food for haburger like MacDonald or Burger King, but in my opion thay’re a danger for the human healty beacuse if you abouse of this junk food on regular basis, it’s possible to have different problem like high pressure.
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    • Actually, we have fast food for haburgerhamburger fast food joints like MacDonalds or Burger King, but in my opinion thaey’re a danger for theto human healtyh beacause if you abouse of this junk food on regular basis by eating too much of it, it’s possible to have disufferent problems like high blood pressure. ¶
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    • ActuIn Itally we have fast food for haburger likedo we have such fast food services as MacDonald or's and Burger King, but in my opinion thay’re a danger for the human heese entities offer poor-quality beacuse if you abouse of this junk food on regular basis, it’s possible to have differentproducts that are not nutritious ¶
      and their regular consumption leads to such health       problem likes as high pressure. ¶
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