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  • Chapter Two

    • Ararat have been so inspired, like an athlete in the face of public, that have keep in hands a pole, and was elated by audience support in front of his noble jump.
    • But now Ararat is alone, with pen, in comfortable room, next to the window with the view to stunning mountains that are giving him some inspiration as well.
    • Michael have sit with some kind of look like "He have saw an really abnormally-funny alien, that came from sky and give him a flute with words: "Now it's your turn to have some playing".
  • "What the hell it just was" .
    • He had that thought in his head and no other ones to make his more aware in "this situation".
    • He bent down to find that ring on the car flooring, but it's just disappeared.
    • He turned on the lightswitch to make a flooring a bit lighter.
  • No, he could not find the ring at all.
    • Then after a while, cars that were behind them begin beeping.
    • One of the drivers even stick this head out the window and scream: "What the fuck, dude... move it, move it!" .
    • The driver and Michael came back on the Earth.
    • The driver, his name is Andrew pushed the gas pedal, and car begin moving.
    • The sun was close to the horizon but it was still too hot even for autumn. Time is 16:40.
    • Twenty minutes before meeting, it was his first big writing, he feels confident but that tiny whining barely noticeable feeling says: "oh, your writing has some flaws which you did not found".
    • He folded his arms in front of his face and said: "God, help me" and came out the car.
  • Now he understood why it was so hot.
    • Very close he sees cloudy sky, with huge heavy clouds that look like prancing a blue dance wearing gunmetal suits.
  • He even smells threshold of rain in the air.
    • The opposite sun makes them look menacingly.
    • He stays in front of the main door of bulky skyscraper, it looks like he stay in front of big crag that made by class but still keeping that cumbersomeness.
  • Suddenly he took a look on his hand...
  • "What the hell!".. it was the ring on his finger...
    • What happens next my dear reader you will see in next article, see you.

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