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  • Summary

    • the article is about the bad affair or aid business.
    • According to the author, Linda Polman, in countries afflicted by wars, children are mutilated to ask for charity.
    • The journalist exposes many anecdotes to demonstrate that charity donations are used for iad business.
    • One of his sources claims that western governements allocate money just to show their compassion and get general approval by citizens.
  • The article ends by giving the example of ONGs, that appear everytime there is a tragedy just to steal their money and to be advertised for their business.
    • The journalist's main idea is that if people all over the world would know what happens to their donations, they would certainly stop doing it.

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