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  • Extreme sports

    • Some people think that extreme sports help to build character.
    • The problem of influence of extreme sports to human life has always aroused heated debates.
    • Some people think that this kind of activity make them stronger.
    • Others believe that the extreme sports are dangerous and risky.
    • In my opinion, the extreme sports are unsafe and insane.
    • Indeed, people often take injuries or die during these activities.
    • For example, the person may drown during a rafting.
    • Moreover, the extreme sports are very expensive.
  • I think that it does not cost so much.
    • Some opponents might say that the extreme sports make people more stronger and hardier.
    • During this kind of activity humans learn how to live in natural conditions, ti save their life from hunters, to build a shelter.
  • Thanks to the extreme sports people learn how to save their life in emergency situations.
    • It is a funny kind of activity and a schoo of survival.
  • To a certain extent, it is right, but we should not forget the risk of extreme sports.
    • I would rather learn how to act during the emergency situations from textbooks than get a chance to become an invalid.
  • Taking all this into account, I want to say that people must think about their safety.

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English