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    • Goog morning, I'm writing you about an escursion to Perito Moreno, which I'd like to do on the 26th of August.
  • There are four of us, and we'd like to do the "mini trekking" excursion with transfert by El Calafate.
    • We also would like to spend a day at Spegazzini Glacier, but we'd prefere to book this excursion once we come back from Perito Moreno,because in case the weather wouldn't have been good, we could do over the same tour the day after.
  • It would be such a shame to cross the ocean to see this amazing spectacle with no light!
  • How can I book the excursion?
    • Below the names of participating All adults; Mr. xxxx Mrs xxxx Mr. xxxxx Mr. xxxx Thank you Have a great day

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    • We also would like to spend a day at Spegazzini Glacier, but we'd prefere to book this excursion once we come back from Perito Moreno,because in case the weather wouldn't have been good, we could do over the same tour the day after.
      Vote now!
    • We also would like to spend a day at Spegazzini Glacier, but we'd prefere to book this excursion once we come back from Perito Moreno,because in case the weather wouldn't have beenisn't good, we could do over the same tourit the day after instead.
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    • Below the names of participating All adults; Mr. xxxx Mrs xxxx Mr. xxxxx Mr. xxxx Thank you Have a great day
      Vote now!
    • Beloware the names of all the participating¶All adults;¶¶Mr. xxxx¶Mrs xxxx¶Mr. xxxxx¶Mr. xxxx¶¶Thank you¶Have a great day
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