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  • Please correct my mistakes. Thank you very much.

  • Hello.
  • Today, I read a book.
    • It's name is "Tôt-tô-chan, the girl who is sitting next to the window". It was great.
    • It was about a girl, who names Tôt-tô-chan.
    • When she was small, she couldn't learn in any school because of many reasons.
    • One of these reason is she always make the class noisy.
    • Her teacher couldn't remind her, her school expulsioned her.
    • She changed many other schools but the happens same that.
    • Finally, Tôt-tô-chan went and learnt in a school name Tomoe.
    • Its classes made by wagons.
    • There were 9 classes and a library.
    • There were 50 students there too.
    • There were many different things with other schools.
    • They didn't have timetable.
    • Their teachers wrote the lessons on the board and they could choose the lessons to do.
  • If they did all the lessons, they could go out and play with other students and their teachers.
    • They made their lunch at home and they brought to their school.
    • In there lunch must have "the food from the sea and the food from the land".
    • If they didn't have one of them, the principal's wife took them some salat or some grilled chopped fish.
    • And a lot of things too.
  • I will tell you next time. Goodbye.

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