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  • Informal letter

  • You are studying at an international college for a few months.
    • Your friend, Elena, is thinking of studying at the same college this summer and has written to you asking about it.
    • Write a letter to her saying whether you think she should study at the college or not and giving your reasons.
  • Hi Elena, It was really great to hear from you.
    • I´m so glad you´re thinking about coming.
  • To tell you the truth, I am absolutely pleased with the colleague.
  • What is more, it would be great to spend the summer together.
    • About the reasons you can find to take your final decision: Firstly, you should come because you´ll make international friends.
    • People come from all over the world.
    • For example, in my class, my peers are from Check republic, France, Spain, Switzerland, and Mexico.
  • Apart from the contents of the course, it´s worth learning about other cultures.
  • I have to say, this experience is opening my mind.
  • Secondly, our teacher is great because he is dynamic, nice, motivating and he understands us when we have problems.
    • In fact, he is the first one to help us.
    • I don´t know if in summer you´ll have the same teacher, but it seems to me all the teacher staff have the same skills.
  • Thirdly, the free time activities are quite complete.
  • Every afternoon we have the choice of staying inside or going out.
    • What is more all the activities are aimed to promote our knowledge among students.
  • Oh, and one more thing, it´s very easy to get to know friends because all the learners are in the same situation.
    • Since the first day, I can say my classmates are my friends we go together everywhere.
    • Well, that´s it for now.
  • Let me know if I can clarify more questions.
  • Speak soon, Charo

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