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  • Liverpool 2

    • We caught a train to Birmingham then Liverpool for 8:30 am.
    • Liverpool is an ample space city quite lively with several monuments including museums as the Merseyside Maritime Museum and the International Slavery Museum that we've been visiting and captivated.
    • Every directions around us were attractive and we struggled to make a decision.
    • Also many pubs for all tastes and budgets were available, busy, quiet or died easy to find.
  • Liverpool was the port of registry of the ocean liner Titanic.
    • The Titanic may have had Liverpool painted on its stern but the ship never visited the city but Liverpool's contribution to the ship was substantial.
  • About 90 members of the crew came from the city, including the two lookouts who spotted the iceberg.
    • Titanic, then the largest ship in the world, left Southampton for New York on Wednesday 10 April 1912.
  • With her crew of 892 she carried 2,208 people in all.
  • Although she was little more than half full, her 20 lifeboats could only carry about half of the people on board...
    • We went in a restaurant and Grant was really hungry, we had beef and pork rib with chips and a glass of rum, the meal was expensive.
    • I slaughtered my thumb in the toilet because the locker was jammed and I jerked my hand on the side to raved it and hit my thumb on a sharpening part of the locker...
  • I bought bandages afterwards.
    • After lunch we walked in the street and took pictures, we went to both museum.
    • Then we went to two different pub had a drink each.
    • We stepped back to the train station and waited for our train outside.
    • We found a phone on the floor and gave the loss to the police inside the train station.
    • I got home at 11:30 pm and was exhausted.
    • Liverpool is also the birthplace of the band The Beatles, Albert Dock is the world’s largest permanent exhibition purely devoted to the lives and times of The Beatles.

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