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Text from Stefa21 - English

    • a little story

  • I : - I wanna tell you something.
    • (I was smiling while he is looking me into my eyes) Luke :- -what happen ?
  • I: - I can't say it now.
    • (however he insisted ) Luke : - tell me now I : - after class , what do you think ?
    • ( he doesn't seem very convinced , I thought I would say no) Luke : - okay, i wait you in the hallway near the lockers... bye ( he says goodbye giving me a kiss.
    • I say goodbye and i walk to the classroom ) FEW HOURS AFTER Sophia : -i think that gonna rain later,hey , what are you thinking ?.
    • I notice you are distracted.
    • (she said it, pulling away of me.
    • I was thinking about that he would tell luke,it was a big secret to keep and perhaps would destroy our relationshipr and sofia my best friend was suspicious )

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