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  • A Poem

  • One egg I bought yesterday hatched .
  • and a small chicken appeared .
  • How ugly it was . Sick mucus .
    • The only one black feather .
  • It looked up at me with its gemmy eyes .
    • Opened its immature pink mouth and asked me .
    • ''Could I live with you,please?" I stepped back subconsciously .
    • However,nodded my head .
    • When the time flu with the wind like green leaves .
    • When the time crossed the sky like falling stars .
  • When she never asked me whether I will leave her at all .
    • I found I was totally wrong .
  • Is she just a chicken?
  • She has colorful shining feathers .
    • She has elegant flying gesture .
    • In the day,she always ran in the forest .
  • Soared up swiftly into the air .
  • And then dived ,broke the peace of lack.
    • End up with a perfect ripple .
    • In the,evening,exhausted and contented,she laid quietly on the rocking chair .
    • What a overwhelming desire I felt to detain this young her .
    • Thought each feathers of her was dying to freedom .
  • One day, I hugged her and said to her softly .
  • ''My dear,please set out with your courage rather than stay with me painfully " 一只小鸡从我昨日买的鸡蛋中出生. 它是如此的丑陋. 恶心的黏液. 浑身上下只有一根乌漆的羽毛.
  • 它用那双宝石般的眼珠子望着我.
  • 张开未发育完全的粉色的喙，恳求道.
  • "我能跟你一起生活吗？" 我下意识地后退一步. 却有轻轻地点头. 当时间随着绿叶乘风而去. 当时间随着流星划破天际. 当她不再询问我是否会抛弃他. 我才发现自己错得离谱. 她怎么会是一只小鸡呢. 那阳光下闪耀的五彩翎羽. 那仪态万千的飞翔姿态. 白天，她在森领中无尽地奔跑. 在苍穹之下翱翔. 猛地俯冲入湖底. 炸成完美的涟漪.
  • 傍晚，疲倦的她静静地趴在摇椅上. 嘴角微微上扬.
  • 我是多么想留住这蓬勃旺盛的她.
  • 可是，她的每一根羽毛都闪耀着自由的光辉.
  • 终有一天，我轻轻地拥抱、亲吻她，说 "亲爱的孩子，带着勇气出发吧"

МОЛИМО, ПОМОЗИТЕ ИСПРАВИТИ СВАКУ РЕЧЕНИЦУ! - English