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  • Reality show

    • The television-reality consists in showing, as part of a recurrent programme, situations putting famous individuals or not, in situations inspired by reality (corenting, job in the farm).Reality TV allows enthusiasts candidates ( cooking, sewing and singing for example ) to make meaningful encounters with professionals, diffcult access in real life .
  • This is a suitable platform to seize opportunities and to be exposed to the public.
    • Other hand, some participants are paid , see earn a big stamp in the end.
  • This money can enable them to lead a major project.
    • Finally, the reality can help people in difficulties and even save lives!
    • One example shows where the best surgeons rebuild the large face burned.
  • The reality show seems to be a big success in all countries of the world.
    • Indeed, The number of audimat was relatively high and the programmes of television-reality created a phenomenon of society often recalled in dialogues of the population.
    • The profitability of the programmes of television-reality is "record" because they have an extrèmement weak production cost (the participants are paid, no scenario).
    • So these programmes could be received as of great television.When we watch TV, we see an endless number of types of television-reality.
    • Television-reality takes more and more importance and they often think in programmes they are most popular of television.
    • They find many television-realities which is worldwide broadcast.
  • For example the programme The Voice is produced in many countries of the world.
    • There is also Survivor or Big Brother which were produced in many countries.
  • However, in the extreme, the operation of this "empire of reality" actually has nothing to do with what we call television reality.
    • Candidates can quickly be converted into calibrated puppets, pampered time of the shooting and then immediately discarded as soon as the time passes and the camera stops.
    • The man becomes a pure commercial product. hungry candidates risking their lives, humiliated in disputes, dragged through the mud of a farm or into filmed their sexual antics, nothing is spared, the key word being the hearing.
    • These emissions can be particularly toxic to children who do not have "against-fires" to TV pictures (other educational media, such as reading or other human models, as rich and numerous family exchanges).
  • Indeed, the "reality TV" delivers an artificial image and dummy of existence and human relations (false fraternities, tears staged, behavior calculated based on the camera ...).
    • All emotions are often produced there.It would be dangerous to have a general view and judged on reality TV in general.
  • In fact , emissions are many and varied quality.
  • A key point is to keep in mind: if they can approach the reality , they are no less staged.
    • Indulge knowing keep your distance !

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    • The television-reality consists in showing, as part of a recurrent programme, situations putting famous individuals or not, in situations inspired by reality (corenting, job in the farm).Reality TV allows enthusiasts candidates ( cooking, sewing and singing for example ) to make meaningful encounters with professionals, diffcult access in real life .
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    • Theis television-reality series show consists inof showing, as part of a recurrent programme, situations putting famous individuals or not, in individuals in real situations. These people may be famous or not. Some of the situations inspirecould bye reality (corenting, job in the farm).Room-mates, job on a farm, cooking, singing or sewing. This reality TV show allows enthusiastsic candidates ( cooking, sewing and singing for example ) to makto have meaningful encounters with professionals,. Some that are difficult to access in real life .
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    • Indeed, The number of audimat was relatively high and the programmes of television-reality created a phenomenon of society often recalled in dialogues of the population.
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    • Indeed, The number of audimat______ was relatively high and the programmes of television-reality. The reality TV programs have created a phenomenon ofin society often recalled in dialogueinterviews of the population.
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    • The profitability of the programmes of television-reality is "record" because they have an extrèmement weak production cost (the participants are paid, no scenario).
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    • The profitability of the programmes of television-reality isprograms are "record" because they have an extrèmement weakly low production cost (t. The participants are paid, but not scenario)ripted.
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    • So these programmes could be received as of great television.When we watch TV, we see an endless number of types of television-reality.
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    • So these programmes could be receivviewed as of great television. When we watch TV, we see an endless number of types of television-reality shows.
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    • Television-reality takes more and more importance and they often think in programmes they are most popular of television.
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    • Television-reality takes more and more importance and they often think in programmes they arReality TV are becoming more and more important. They are often the most popular of televisionprograms.
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    • However, in the extreme, the operation of this "empire of reality" actually has nothing to do with what we call television reality.
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    • Candidates can quickly be converted into calibrated puppets, pampered time of the shooting and then immediately discarded as soon as the time passes and the camera stops.
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    • Candidates can quickly be converted into calielebrated puppets, pampered at the time of the shooting and then immediately discarded as soon as the time passes and the camera stops.
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    • The man becomes a pure commercial product. hungry candidates risking their lives, humiliated in disputes, dragged through the mud of a farm or into filmed their sexual antics, nothing is spared, the key word being the hearing.
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    • The maperson becomes a pure commercial product. hHungry candidates risking their lives, humiliated in disputes, dragged through the mud of a farm or into filmed during their sexual antics, nothing is spared, the key word being the hearing.____
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    • These emissions can be particularly toxic to children who do not have "against-fires" to TV pictures (other educational media, such as reading or other human models, as rich and numerous family exchanges).
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    • These emissionimages can be particularly toxic to children who do not have "against-firefilters" to TV pictures. (other educational media, such as reading or other human models, as rich and numerous family exchanges).
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    • Indeed, the "reality TV" delivers an artificial image and dummy of existence and human relations (false fraternities, tears staged, behavior calculated based on the camera ...).
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